No place like home

The time travel story I though of yesterday came out in a 1,500 word draft. Steph liked it, but wanted a little more detail in the story. Part of a flashback runs too fast. I've fleshed it out a bit and it's up to 1,800 words, maybe 1,900, depending on how the words are really counted. I may try to get it up to 2,000 words, but I don't want to add much more or the story feels like it's plodding along.

I used a sketch of my sister in law, who is a psychologist, for the main character. I doubt the real Alicia would suggest hypnotic memory mining, as my story's Alicia does.

I'll add a permanent link to my lit.org author page to the sidebar.