Nerves

I left my workshop last night feeling very nervous about my first story to them. It turns out that there are two therapists in the workshop, and my story No Place Like Home has a therapist as one of the main characters. After talking with them briefly about my story, which they looked at while other people were critiqueing other works. Now I have ideas of how I could retool the story. I wrote the story as a patient meeting a therapist for the first time because I couldn't see how to get them to have several sessions. The nature of the clients problem prevented it. Now I have ideas, but I won't get the feedback from others until November 30, which is also the due date for NaNoWriMo (and I'm way behind NaNoWriMo).

I was going to bring Murder in Exile which was rejected, but I remembered that I had Body Double and I think it's a much stronger story. I did some quick edits and I'll take that in for my next story distribution.